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Kostia Dmytriiev's avatar

"Not murdered. Sacrificed. For her." That's the whole thing, isn't it, a man relabeling what he's done so he can live with it. And letting the ritual seem to fail before she answers was a smart move, the panic made the payoff hit. The dead oracle's eyes that won't close stayed with me too. Strong, ominous open.

Stephen Thomas's avatar

This is gorgeous and I could not stop reading. I am so used to thinking through and writing futile sacrifice that an ANSWERED one takes on fresh potency. This book is going to be fabulous.

A semantic detail that gave me joy - the right-hand downstroke on the R is so faint it almost makes the letter look like a capital Rho. I loved that!

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